The Interdiction Intercept – Comments Requested

This is the final part of the Interdiction Intercept I plan to post here.

If you like the story, or even if you don’t like it, please comment and let me know.

Thank you

https://retrorockets.wordpress.com/2013/06/11/the-interdiction-intercept-part-1/
https://retrorockets.wordpress.com/2013/06/17/the-interdiction-intercept-part-2/
https://retrorockets.wordpress.com/2013/06/25/the-interdiction-intercept-part-3/

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4 thoughts on “The Interdiction Intercept – Comments Requested

  1. Cliffhanger ending notwithstanding a very delightful story. It is nice to read new work where the golden age notes resonate so strongly. The story’s basic grounding in science and general lack of techno-magic is quite pleasing as well. The story is fast paced and is without much substantial character development, but this was true of much if the old pulp as well. I would like to see more world building in the Ognom system. I sincerely hope you continue the adventure.

    • Yeah! My first comment.

      Thanks for taking the time to read and commenting on the story. The feedback is appreciated.

      The cliffhanger is about 2/3’s the way through the story. There is more. I’m hoping to save the rest for the off chance it actually gets published someday.

      I’m glad you enjoyed it.

  2. Bravo! I have no constructive criticism to give because I cannot think of any way to improve the story. I know that is not much help to you but there it is.
    As far as I am concerned the scientific accuracy was spot on, and the story was exciting and engrossing.

    • Thank you for the kind comment.

      I have enjoyed your Atomic Rockets site for several years and have used the information there to try and work out the background for the story.

      I’m glad you enjoyed it.

      Please recomment it to all your friends.

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